Proofread this script and PM me your corrections. Why pm? Because if you post your corrections here someone could just copy your test and claim it as his own!
You should look for spelling errors (lots of these), inappropriate use of punctuations (there are several missing ones as well), and awkwardly phrased sentences (these you should try to reword to the best of your ability).
Hullo proofreeder. This is yur testes. Begin! Nao XD
- But if I have a duplecate cards, or any other cards I dont want... - ...I'll trade it with other collecter. #2 - Oh, so that's why their called trading cards! - Section Cheaf!! #3 - It was liked this... I was acqauinted w/ a collecter named sakamoto... - His collection was similar to mine’s, so we traded severeal time... #4 - ...than we founded out we both likes too gamble. - Eventually we started beting our collections on our games? #5 But... but! (Ah, you can't judg a person by there appearence, Natsuki!)
Page 162 - But I haven't even won even once at all! Why?! - Oh, so he is the type to lost control over those emotions of his... - I've lost ten time in a rows! #2 - Later I discoverred that, to get cards, from others collectors Sakamoto is using the similar method. - It isn't fare! Isn't fare! #3 - I... we understand. We'll except yur reaquest, so please get a wholed on yurself! - Erm... so, what're the game yu played? #4 - It's... backgammon! - ...eh?
Page 163 - In backgammon, you play with two dices... - And then... and then... #2 - The frist player to move all 15 of his chips to the finish line win. - Oh? You know how to play? - Uh... but it still have others detailed rules...
DO NOT copy and paste this onto a word document. Be honorable and use your actual proofreading skills to spot and correct the grammatical errors. Try your best. Don't worry if you cannot find all the errors. We just wanna use this test to see where your level is at.
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