WebsiteHomeCalendarFAQSearchMemberlistUsergroupsRegisterLog in

Share | 
 

 Agate's Cleaner Application (Edit!)

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
Agate Fluorite

avatar

Posts : 4
Join date : 2010-12-22

PostSubject: Agate's Cleaner Application (Edit!)   2011-01-31, 08:10

Name: Agate
Experience: I once work for Inmeliora scans la la la la la , but that was nearly 2 years ago so ....Gaaah I guess I'm collecting dusts in my rusty skills It...cant be... . I am a CG artist, so I guess I can do bit here and there Happy
Free Time: I am free until April Good work
Project you would like to work on: Any project will do gimme gimme gimme

......!....... ....My Pages.... ......!.......

Page 1
Page 2
Page 3
Page 4
Page 5

Gaaahhh!! I'm still not good with the copy T^T

Looking forward to my 'exam' result *kneel* I hope I can work with you guys Bye Bye


Last edited by Agate Fluorite on 2011-02-08, 06:35; edited 1 time in total
Back to top Go down
View user profile
tyresonance
Admin
avatar

Posts : 89
Join date : 2010-11-18
Age : 27
Location : En La Cima Del Cielo

PostSubject: Re: Agate's Cleaner Application (Edit!)   2011-02-07, 19:29

Bah. It took me a week to get to you :/. I apologize for the wait.

Alright- my critique:

Overall: Not bad, but you have room for improvement.

Page 1 - looks fine. Good Job :>

Page 2- Black have not been leveled correctly. The paper tone is still visible.

Page 3-
Again, blacks are underleveled, whites could have been a tad bit more leveled.

There are still several dust spots that have not been cleaned (which would have to be cleaned manually since leveling probably won't take care of them).

Good job on the pattern- there is only a minor speck that you missed.

For the middle, you failed to clone the patterns (the backgound, the tails, the trees, the lowest border of that panel) so its still obvious there is a break.

page 4-

good job on the number 4 there. Cloning is not bad but ideally you want it to be as seemless as possible. On you cloning, i can see the outlines of the areas that have been cloned/pasted. Take for example the flower- there are lighter areas/lines and the same repeated pattern make it obvious that the area was cloned.

levels are fine but the black borders on the sides is unnecessary.

page 5-
huh... I think your the first to do such a good job on this one.
Now- the page isn't rotated correctly and whites are under leveled. you missed a couple of white speck in the blacks but otherwise its dandy.

^^ fix these things and you'll be good to go~
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://immortalabyss.wordpress.com
 
Agate's Cleaner Application (Edit!)
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Stazon Cleaner
» Lime sulfur application on LIVING wood
» 75 minute fan edit of An Unexpected Journey
» Dream Job Application. Position: George Clooney’s Girlfriend
» I want to edit deck and duel help me!

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Immortal Abyss :: Join us!! :: Recruitment :: Editors, Cleaners, & Typesetters-
Jump to: